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Jousting Horse

Started by Manwariel, June 01, 2009, 11:47:48 AM

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Manwariel

Thunder,
your hooves on the sand
as you give your all.
Inspiration,
your beauty and strength
as you pass me by.
Sunlight glints
on the metal of your trappings,
set off like fire
against your bright caparison.

Steel,
your nerves
as a lance shatters.
Implicit,
the trust of your knight
in his companion.
Wind blows
through your glistening mane,
streaming behind
like the banner of your rider.

Rani Zemirah

Wonderful imagery, excellent flow, nicely balanced symmetry. Beautiful work! 

Thank you for sharing...  :)
Rani - Fire Goddess

Aut disce... aut discede

Manwariel