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Title: Ireland
Post by: mary on July 27, 2008, 10:07:45 PM


the very air breathes green
-gentle sweeps of sweet grass

mazes of dark pens
creep to the craggy steeps
-patches of lichen on sweaty grey

the clumps of stone ruins
castles, abbeys, dove-cotes
are slimy with mold, musty closeness

vast, sun-dappled forests
tall trunks dripping ivy
-barky masses sunk deep in cool moss

varied sand rock fringes
-roiling swell of the sea...



Title: Re: Ireland
Post by: Blackbead on July 28, 2008, 08:46:52 AM
Very nice, lass!  I especially like the image - "barky masses sunk deep in cool moss."  Thank ye for sharing yer art!

Blackbead
Title: Re: Ireland
Post by: renren on September 08, 2008, 07:12:04 PM
As beautiful as the Isle itself!
Title: Re: Ireland
Post by: Rani Zemirah on September 18, 2008, 12:24:07 PM
Very evocative... like breathing in an atmosphere of timeless antiquity. Lovely piece! Thanks for sharing...