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Title: Jousting Horse
Post by: Manwariel on June 01, 2009, 11:47:48 AM
Thunder,
your hooves on the sand
as you give your all.
Inspiration,
your beauty and strength
as you pass me by.
Sunlight glints
on the metal of your trappings,
set off like fire
against your bright caparison.

Steel,
your nerves
as a lance shatters.
Implicit,
the trust of your knight
in his companion.
Wind blows
through your glistening mane,
streaming behind
like the banner of your rider.
Title: Re: Jousting Horse
Post by: Rani Zemirah on September 17, 2009, 01:28:36 AM
Wonderful imagery, excellent flow, nicely balanced symmetry. Beautiful work! 

Thank you for sharing...  :)
Title: Re: Jousting Horse
Post by: Manwariel on September 18, 2009, 11:37:29 PM
Thank you :)